- It was my first day at St. Glitzmen College, And i knew it was going to be hell. I had only been to one other school, But seeing my circumstances i really had no choice but to move. It was a cold winter morning in 2004, And i was on my way to school. I had a thousand things rushing through my head, Like what the day ahead of me will be like, Will i make any new friends, And also, Why my parents had divorced each other. I always thought that they were happy together, But obviously i was wrong. Looking down at my shoes, I felt ridiculous. Wearing shiny black shoes, Knee high socks, In a blue dress, With a tie... Wouldnt you feel ridiculous? Sure i'm a fourteen years old, But unlike most girls my age, I never dressed like this. I hadn't worn a dress since i was seven. As i was walking down my street, My new school came into view. It was starting to grow fairly cold, And i hadn't worn a jumper. I started to shiver as i walked in the school gate. It was starting to get kind of windy, So i hurried to get to the main office. The lady at the front desk seemed polite. She kindly smiled at me, And stood up. "I'll take you to your classroom". She sounded old and fragile but she didnt look it, She looked not a day over 40. We walked silently on the brick path, Her high heels clicking on the cement. We climbed a flight of stairs, Walking up the corridor to the class i felt like a prisoner on deathrow; Not knowing what was going to happen next. She knocked on the door then turned the door handle. We walked in, It was quiet all of a sudden. I felt the eyes of every student in that room, On me. My face was starting to feel hot, Like i was blushing. "Ah, And you must be Chelsea Morris..." The teacher had said from behind her desk. "I'm Mrs Collins, Your homeroom teacher". I smiled and nodded, Unsure of what to say. She told me to pick a seat, I chose one up the back. Seeing as i knew no-one, I felt kind of strange. I looked around the room, There were a group of guys fighting about a football game that was on television the night before. In the middle ofthe class, There were a group of girls, Talking about some hot guys. In the corner there were three guys, They were quietly whispering among each other. There were also three girls sitting in front of me. One turned around and looked at me curiously.. "Uh, hi... i'm Anna" she said with a smile. The other girls just sat there, Talking to one another. Then they turned around too. I smiled at them, And they kind of smiled back, But their smile seemed forced, They looked unsure of what to do and what to say. "I'm haylee, And this is Aliza." She said quietly and looked to the girl next to her, And looked back at me. Haylee had blonde hair, And hazel eyes, her friend Aliza had brown hair and green eyes. They were both fairly skinny. Anna looked alot different. She had dark hair, With bits of Blonde through it and she had sky blue eyes. I was fasinated by her eyes, They looked so clear and bright. She wasnt what you call skinny, But nor was she fat. I looked down at my desk, It had writing over it along with graffiti. I was staring at the desk, Everything was still rushing around in my head, But all of a sudden something interupted my thoughts. It was the bell ringing for lesson change.
- by x Zombie Rawr Baby x |
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- | Submitted on 11/08/2008 |
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- Title: Teenage Tragedy -- Part One.
- Artist: x Zombie Rawr Baby x
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This is the first part of my story. I havent completed this story yet.
Its about a teenage girl called chelsea, who has to go through all the things that a teenager does. Do comment and tell me what you think. - Date: 11/08/2008
- Tags: teenage tragedy part
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Comments (3 Comments)
- x Zombie Rawr Baby x - 04/12/2009
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I know, It was my first attempt at writing anything.
They second part was much better, but i lost it all because my computer got a virus and had to wipe everything from it.. - Report As Spam
- HowTheGrinchStoleRamadan - 04/06/2009
- Not bad, your grammar needs checking every now and then, capitalisation on random words isn't a good thing and there aren't any paragraphs to break it down. It seems kind of monotonous =/
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- Saraez - 11/26/2008
- Not much is going on, which is honestly unsurprising. Early on your capitilization is sort of hit and miss, which you need to work on. It's okay, but the story needs work.
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