I loved . . .

• Artist: momo the momi
• Description: A very fluff discription of loving and then loosing somebody. A reflection if you will. It's very short but I'd love to write more. Please comment.
• Date: 11/04/2008
• Tags: ilovedreflection

I loved . . . in a way that was new and profound . . . and deeply passionate.

I loved . . . in a sense that overpowered all of my senses . . . that left me feeling cold and hot . . . that made me smell and touch everything about you. My senses came alive just like everything else came alive when I was with you.

I loved . . . in a blessed way . . . a way that left me reeling from these new awakened feelings, a way that I knew could never last . . .

I loved in way that was destined to fail. I loved you.

Comments

[RamonaFlow3rs]

I liked it, but your description was misspelled in many ways, which was disappointing.
Overall, a decent piece; but practice helps.