- There once was a young man named Shin who was torn by two sides of his family. One died at a long time ago about 250 years ago and the other banished him from their realm. Shin had to walk from town to town wreaking havoc on countless people because they called him a freak. As Shin's reputation grew so did the danger of him being captured. Shin one day on a rainy, cloudy, and gloomy day was walking through a hidden path when he heard gun shots. Shin ran as gun shots grazed him by his arms and legs. Shin's heart starts pounding uncontrollably and his body is engulfed in flames. He yells at them in pain and shoots out flames that engulf the whole path and the ground melts away from his flames and now he must hide before more arrive. Calming down Shin will rest in a cave for a while hoping that tomorrow morning it will be a bright sunny day.
- by The Wandering Immortal |
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- | Submitted on 10/21/2008 |
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- Title: *NEW* The One.
- Artist: The Wandering Immortal
- Description: I've just started writing so I'd like to enjoy if you would not hate seriously...no haters in the house.
- Date: 10/21/2008
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- starryluminara - 11/18/2013
- Jumbled and confusing; it could be interesting but you need to consider format and describe rather than summarize 2/5
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