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The sun rises on 21st Street. It started as a normal day in the small town of Savor. The world was at peace. Margrot Johnson arose from her slumber and looked on the dresser at the clock. 7:00 it said. She put on her robe and walked down the stairs to the kitchen and made morning breakfast. Her husband Jim Johnson walks down in his robe and kisses Margrot on the lips. "Hello honey have a nice sleep?" She inquired. "Yep the best I've had since the surgery." He replies. "Good to know here your coffee." She said passing a warm cup that read number one husband. "And last but not least your food." She said. "Hmmm looks good." He said licking his lips. Magrot walks out the kitchen heading towards the door. She opens the door and looks down for the paper. She grabs it and looks at the head liner. Then notices a orange package on the ground. She picks it up and looks for any sign of a name. Nothing, so she opens it up and there was a note inside. It read "I am a sending you these pictures for a good reason your husband is decieving you." She looks at the photos. She drops her paper. She closes the door with a bang. She heads toward the kitchen furious. She lays the photos on the table infront of Jim. "Tell me what these are!" She said in an angry tone. He turns the photos around and spills his coffee on himself. He gasped. "Um,um." He stutters. "Where in the world did you get this from?" He asked. "Dont change the subject damn it!" She screams in anger. "Tell me what those are. No better yet tell me who this is." She points to a female face. "I don't know." He says. "You stop lying to me who is this and why is she on top of you?" He walks out the kitchen into the living room. "Well." She says. "It's some girl." He says. "Some girl!" She screams. "Yeah some girl I met at my job." His voice rising. She slaps him across the face. He pulls back and slaps her. She goes down crying....... And that is just the begining of T.D.D.U.P.
To Be Continued...........
- by xxxA-Stray-Starxxx |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/18/2008 |
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- Title: Til Death Do Us Part..... P.1
- Artist: xxxA-Stray-Starxxx
- Description: A crazy wife gone mad when she finds out her husband has been cheating on her. A mysterious person leaving photo's at her door step. Annymous calls. Murder. Is it true is he really cheating on her only one way to find out......read!!!
- Date: 10/18/2008
- Tags: murder cheating deciet
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Comments (5 Comments)
- _Three_Tears_Undead_ - 12/22/2008
- I love seeing aspiring writers on gaia, its the best place to find them! ^_^ Keep going it looks great!
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- xX Paranoid Agent Xx - 10/18/2008
- i mean...i can't wait to read the rest ^_^ peace
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- xX Paranoid Agent Xx - 10/18/2008
- That's good and it kept me interested...can't read the rest ^_^. I bet that girl was a hooker...lol...peace
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- W00tification - 10/18/2008
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Its too scrunched please add in some paragraphs so it can be easier to read. And there isnt much description on the way you reply. It isnt allways "He said, she said, or he replies and he gasps"
Sometimes its better without the descriptions because it can get redundent. - Report As Spam
- Kyouou - 10/18/2008
- It's a great story. I really like it. Needs a few grammar checks, but the story itself looks like it's gonna turn into something awesome =]
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