- the fire was coming around me, it had already swlowed my family whole, the taunting smell of their chard fleash still lingered in the air. I had to keep running, i had to try and get out of here. i ran, I ran as fast as i could! just then a tree cashes down infrount of me, i look around, trying to find a way to safty, I turn left and try to run, my foot gets caught in a hole and i fall to the ground, hitting my knee on a sharp rock, causing it to bleed. i try to stand up, it hurts so bad, but i manage to do it. i take my first step out to freedom, i take my second. Pain screaches through my leg and I fall back down. i can not even try to get up again without feeling like my leg has been riped to shreeds. I crawl towards the exit, but it hurts too much, I decide to cower between two large, fallen oaks, hoping that my death will be quick. the fire is becoming more dominite, annd i am getting no freash air, my lungs fill with smoke and my eyes sting, i take one more look at the world then shut them tight, knowing i may never open them again. i feel my body shuting down, then my brain turning off, slowly... slowly... drifting into an endless slumber.
- by dreamheartnz |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/18/2008 |
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- Title: fire
- Artist: dreamheartnz
- Description: we had to write a creative story for english and wanted to see if this was any good, so please read and coment! :]
- Date: 09/18/2008
- Tags: fire
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Wind-Blown Dandilion - 12/21/2011
- I cant help it Xd SPELL CHECK MAN D:
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- dreamheartnz - 06/19/2009
- thanx for the comments smile
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- little-miss-gimpi - 03/24/2009
- it sad
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- team_jacob_S3XI - 09/20/2008
- i like it go read my story plz
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- Countess Dianna - 09/19/2008
- cool
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