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Fiction
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| Submitted on 09/13/2008 |
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Waking up for a new day, rolling out of his make shift bed. The boy's
name, Omen, has never liked that bed. Starts to move up out of bed, pain
shots down his pack. He looks at the bed "dang it, I really need to get
some more material to fix that bed". Finally getting up, he checks his
right arm, still mechanical and twice the size of his original arm. Finds
a broken pipes, and takes a shower in his own hole in the building. The
home he lives in is just a crumbled area, rocks, rebar supports,
electrical wires and busted pipes. Finally gets done with his shower
drying his black with blonde strands in the front hair dried. He finds his
clothes, which were drying after he washed them the night before, The gets
his clothes on, a black cotton zipper shirt, his righ arm is covered
completely but no sleeve for the left arm. The shirt hugs close to his
body, but the sleeve on his right arm is lose and opens up at the end. The
pants that he wears are also black, durable material. These pants have
many pockets on them to store food or items that he uses everyday. His
belt that he wears on his left hand, wrapped around the hand and secured
well. Finally, he finds his normal seeing glasses. He's learned in the
past to fight with his glasses, making pass bullies fear him as a nerd in
school. But, over time those bullies get bigger and much meanier. Looks at
the mirror, with multiple of cracks in it. Checking on how he is looking
and can people still care who he was. After checking his things, outs on
his boots, and puts two golden curved swords on his back. These swords
were forged and made by him specifically. The blades can open up much like
a pair of scissors but have two smaller blades inside. This sudden opening
and closing action in a battle can almost confuse the opponent and serve
as a tool to disarm people. After tightening the straps around himself, he
heads out to find some food. To him, its another day of hiding, but in
time, its the beginning of his redemption for sins made in the past time.
On the out skits of the city, a lone women rides on her large bike, to the
city. She stops at an overlook of the city. The surroundings are desert on
her side, and forest on the other side of the city. She removes her helmet
revealing a tied up bunch of brown hair she lets now fly freely. A bit of
her hair covers her right eye, which her eyes are green emreld. Her phone
starts to go off, with a groan she answers it. "Detective yuzi reporting,
what is it boss?" she said as she puts a hand on her thin athletic body.
"Have you found him?" the boss asked seeming to be ankshis to get this
guy. She sighs "no, not yeat, I just arrived on the outskirts of the
city". "Well, what are you wating for?! go after him!" the boss shouted at
the detective. "Yes sir" yuzi hangs up and puts the phone away. She then
gets a small device out, which after pressing a botton, opens up with a
screen. The screen turns on and shows her, again, her targets information
and looks. She reads "Omen Hiratak, age: 18, height: 5'11'ft., black hair,
blonde strikes and spikey". She reads more "lightening blue eyes with
glasses, relationship status: single, quiet nature but intellegent". Reads
the final message " considered extreme danger, destroyed yuromgar 7 months
earlier". Closes the device "hmmm.... dangerous?" she chuckles. "this
could be fun then". Yuzi remontes her bike and rides on to her next
target. But to her, its another day, in reality, she will see a truth that
threatens all she holds dear.
Omen emerges through a dumpster, that he tore a hole out of to his his
home entrance. The city that Omen lives in is a large, lots of people, and
skyscrapers that touch the sky. Most people here walk, but contend with
vehicles in the streets as well. The ground floor of the city is mostly
old buildings that the newer more advance buildings have dwarfed. For
Omen, he liked the lover level more, the people who care for each other
stay on the ground, not in a large tin can of fancy proportions. He walks
down the street, crowded as usual, to the open market. The open market, to
Omen, was a place where he could see the world and some of its most
interesting bunch. Finally getting to the open market, he brouses through
the open venders. Most venders, knowing Omen, say 'greetings' or 'good
morning'. He responds back telling them 'good morning' as well to their
polite greetings. He finally finds what he's been walking for, the Market
Cafe. The cafe gives and offers a lot to the markter. The cafe offers
cheap and decent food for venders and customers. Plus the cafe is an open
cafe, most of the seats are out side and on a nice sunny day with the
cafe's famour lemonade, it feels like paradise in the city. Omen enters
the cafe, the Manager seeing him greats Omen "Ah, good morning my friend"
the manager's voice was a cheery one and polite. "Good morning Festie"
Festie has been a nickname that Omen gave to the manager for his cheery
but knowledgeable personality. "ha ha, seems the name never dies eh?" the
manager said, " now lets find you a table, and the usual?". Omen replied,
"yes, the usual" sits down at the table the manager prepared. The table is
under a large apple tree that grows in the cafe. Omen mostly enjoys apples
in all of life. Oemn seems to have a problem or two if he does not have
apples around him, or in his pocket. The food is brought out shortly after
he arrived. The platter that the young waitress was carrying, she puts it
on the table consits of, an omlete with ham, cheese, and apple slices, a
cup of coffee, a news paper and finally 3 freshly picked apples from the
tree behind him. He starts to eat the omlete, happy to get some food in
his system. Drinking his coffee, he reads the head line, 'are you safe
when you hear a bump in the night?'. Remembering past articles, the town
had for some odd reason started having killings that no one could explain.
Anyone was a target, young, old, poor or rich. People who witnessed these
events babbeled about hellish creatures that ripped people apart. Skeptics
say its a single murderor summoning monsters to do these acts. But, as a
summoner would not last long, it took to much power for even an
experienced summoner to summon mulitple of different summons at one time.
However, the poloce believe this summoner gone wild murderor regardless of
the facts. Regardless of the murders, the whole town is scared, wondering
who will go nest. Will it be their neighbor? sibiling? or themselves? As
for Omen, he took hed of where the attacks occured and stayed away from
the area's. After finishing his breakfest and got his 3 apples in his
pocket, he gets up and walks out on to the street. Hes broke, and the
manager allows him to eat for free due to his "condition". As he is
walking down the street, suddenly, electrical cables erupt from the ground
and grab Omen. Its detective Yuzi, shes found her target and shes going
for the kill. "Man, your easier to catch then I thought" she commented
ignoring the on people watching this. The wires tighten around Omen, and
then start to break. "What!" yuzi exlaimed in disbelief. Omen broke the
wires and now is free. He turns, around, both his swords out and jumps at
the attacker. Yuzi grads her spear and starts to block Omen's attacks with
her spear. Omen tries varies moves trying to get a hit on Yuzi, but is
blocked everytime by Yuzi. Yuzi tries to jab at him, but Omen reacts by
jumping up on her spear, balanced and jumps into the air. She looks up at
him in the air, snearals and jumps out after him. Omen turns as a flip in
the air swords coming down on her. Yuzi blocks the blows, and starts to
send blows back to Omen. Omen blocks and both fighters land on the roof
top and still are fighting. "I've had enough of this" oemn commented, his
blades open up and grab yuzi's spear and throws it out of her hand with
his right sword still latched to her spear. Yuzi is shocked that this
occured, Omen follows up with a punching her with his right hand. Yuzi is
sent flying to the ground, he jumps after her spear, and gets his sword
back. This specific action, from when he took her spear away and when he
got his sword back took about 15 seconds. When, she hit the gound, she
created a small crater, her spear landed just outside the crater rim.
While Omen comes down on his two feet with his swords, goes into the
crater and outs the sword to her throat. "why are you here?" his voice
sounded cold and harsh., Yuri replied. through her bloody face,"you... you
broke the law.... you need to be". She was cut off by Omen "Justified? the
ones who need the justification is not I but your superiors". "But..."
tears starting to weal up in her eyes. The charm that he wears on his
right shoulder started to jingle and flash red furiously. Realizing what
is happening, he throws her on his back, grabs her spear. "Everyone! Run!"
he shouted at the on lookers. But to late, a large creature broke the
earth from underneath. The creature towers the buildings, 4 legged, a
nasty complection, almost as if it was a mutated large suropod dinosaur
with a crave for meat. The creature rears up and tires to crush Omen. Omen
dodges, jumps up into the air, a blade in his right hand, and Yuzi,
shocked by events on his left shoulder. The creature opens its mouth,
screeching at ready to eat them. His right arm starts to make a noise,
like clicks and clanks as a lock would. as the noise proceed to increase
in speed, his sword glows brighter and slicies the creatureclear in half.
The creature falls over, producing a large black cloud below in the
street. He lands on a building above the street still has yuzi, who passed
out during the whole event. He looks at the street, the black cloud
disopating, "so, it begins again, yet anewed".
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Title:
Remeption chapter 1
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Artist:
unerak
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Description:
just a story that I'm working on called Redemption
note(read before voting!): this is just a draft, thus things will be grammatically wrong. Just a heads up
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Date:
09/13/2008
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Tags:
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