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Blood
Tanya Lockheart
Even at the age of six, Tanya loved to play with swords, though since she was so young, the swords she played with were wooden. Her brother Hexavior usually played with her, but this night, he was missing. Hopping onto a stump sticking out of the ground, she looked around the clearing the two of them had made so they could play their games. The tree’s surrounding her looked ominous, their branches hanging down like claws, as if they would snatch her up and eat her. Hearing a twig snap, Tanya spun around on the stump, her wooden sword up and at the ready, giggling and lowering it once she realized who it was. “What took you so long?” Tanya asked as she hopped down from her stump, running over and wrapping her arms around her brother, Hexavior. Pulling back and holding her sword at the ready, she blinked, “Where’s your sword?” Looking into his eyes, she started to get worried, usually his eyes were gentle and caring, but right now his eyes were blank, devoid of any emotion. Born only moments before her, the two of them had bonded and could read each other like a book, so she could tell something was wrong. Looking up into Tanya’s eyes, Hexavior smiled slightly, just a small turn of his lips, but still a smile. “I’m leaving,” he said. “Dad may worship Llanach, and Ma may worship Moria, but I wish to serve another.” Turning from her, Hex started to walk away, “Wait,” Tanya called after him, “What about me?” She whispered as her brother disappeared into the forest.
- by VincentVonHex |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/31/2008 |
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- Title: Blood
- Artist: VincentVonHex
- Description: I don't really have chapters in this, just, names of the person who's perspective I'm running through, so there's going to be a lot of chapters and if you like it, just hang in there cause there'll be a lot of different things going on and I'm still writing it, while at school and all this other crap
- Date: 08/31/2008
- Tags: blood violence love hate pain
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Vampiressofweird - 12/27/2009
- write more PLZ! DO DA WORLD A FAVOR!
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- ch1ps0h0y - 09/01/2008
- Ominous but rather short. You need to leave spaces when different people are speaking - that's just a general writing rule. Some general punctuation fixing-up would not go amiss either. Otherwise, good work! smile
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- VincentVonHex - 08/31/2008
- I actually already have more, I just don't feel like putting it up till tomorrow, gives me more time to edit it if I have to, lol
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- Stale Lord - 08/31/2008
- Hey.. love the setting and the cliffhanger at the end.. hope your story doesnt fall down in the writers block way,.
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