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A long time ago,there was this boy named james.He was working on his father's farm.He was planting some tomato plants.His mother told him to get inside quickly.James said,"why mother what is the problem!".James's father grabbed his arm and ran into the house.His mother all the candles in the house.James could hear a loud roaring outside.James said,"what is that father!".His father said no word.James's mother said,"get in the basement!".James screamed,"why!".James's father said,"just do my boy!".After James ran into the basement,his father locked the doors to it.Suddenly the roof crashed down to the floor.There was this big black dragon.It grabbed james's parents and gave out a mighty roar.James thumped and banged on the doors to the basement for he could not get out.James was stuck in the basement for 3 days.When James woke up after the third day.Some lone traveler shouted out from outside of the basement doors.He shouted out,"Is anyone in there!".James said,"Yes i'm in here!.The traveler busted the doors down and carried out James.After that the rest of the saved villagers never heard or saw James again.All they knew was James is with the lone traveler out there training to face the dark dargon,hoping his parents are still alive................
The End......
- by The Fallen Light |
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- | Submitted on 08/31/2008 |
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- Title: The Dragon Slayer
- Artist: The Fallen Light
- Description: There was a boy who's parents got taken away by a dark dragon now he swears revenge he'll kill it..........
- Date: 08/31/2008
- Tags: dragon slayer
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Pouncequick - 08/31/2008
- I have to agree I'm disappointed. You clearly didn't take any time with this, and if you want to be read, you need to. If you can't be bothered to take the time to write an entertaining story, and to use proper spelling, punctuation, and formatting, why would you expect a reader to waste their time reading it and then giving feedback?
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- kloob - 08/31/2008
- it sucks a big one almost as big as mine
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- ch1ps0h0y - 08/31/2008
- The only reason i looked at this was because of the title...did you put any effort into this? The punctuation is poor, and there is minimal description. Not very engaging at all.
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