- trapped in your head, chained down, barely breathing. You start to see a white light, you begin to panic. You try to move but the chains are holding you back. You start to faint, losing all control of you body, you try to move your arms but they were locked in the chains, the light gets bigger and bigger, you see a man dressed in all white, by this time you know your dead. You ask the man "am i dead is this heaven"? The man doesnt answer but swiftly puts his hand over your chest. You get a warm feeling inside. All of a sudden you wake up in your room, but you remember you werent in your room today. You see your mom runs into your room crying. With tears in her eyes she explains how a couple of people found you under a tree, and they called 9-11. At this time your crying too. Your mom starts asking you what you remember. With a little frown you start to tell her about the man in white and the feeling you got when he put his hand over your heart and felt you brealth. You look to find that your mother has broken down crying, afew tears fall down your cheek too. She gave you a little smile and grabbed the tissues, and offered you one, so you took one. You start to tell your mom what the man in white looked like but when you stopped you start to choke on blood. Your mom starts screaming, your dad runs in your room and holds you. your mom runs out of the room and calls the police. This timeyou dont see the man in white, this time you see a man with redish color skin, and with horns. He picks you up by your shirt, you start screaming, he throughs you across the room, you quickly get up and run away from him. He fallows you. He catches up to you, and grabs your arm, pulling you and him to the ground, he gets up before you, and grabs you by your throut, you gasp for air. You reatch for his hand but you cant move. you feel the anger in his eyes. you start to think about the man in white and the feeling you got when he put his hand on you. you get a feeling thats amazing, you try once more to grab his hand. But this time you were sucsessful. with the feeling you grabbed and pulled his hand away from you. you fall to the ground. while he was looking at his hand you start to brealth in freash air. you see the red colored man come towards you. but the man in white comes from the other side of the room and grabs the fist of the red man. The redish colored man starts screaming, he was feeling the pain he had once giving you. You begin to see the light that you saw the first time, but this time you were not afraid of it, you hear the scream of the red man. the light gets really big and bright, its so bright that you have to squinch because the light was so bright, at this time you knew for sure he was god. The man in white comes over and puts his hand on your sholder, and says "its ok everythings ok, you'll go home and nothing bad will happen to you." The next thing you know your in the hospital next to your mother. And you tell everything to your mom, and you could tell she was listening very carefully. the next day you get out of the hospital and live your life, thinkiing of the man in white. You know hes with you.
- Title: the hell of life
- Artist: blaneyi
- Description: a kid who has to deal with alot
- Date: 07/25/2008
- Tags: dealth
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Faryata - 07/03/2010
- im not one to god but that was powerful and moveing simply amazing
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- punks-never-dead - 01/01/2009
- holy sh** that was like really freakin good!! i was intwined with every word...
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- Scarlett_Light - 07/26/2008
- i like it. there's just wrong spelling! but, anyways, 4
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- pumpkinbella - 07/26/2008
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great! ima a writer too so yea....anyway who cares you really had me going and enticed with the vison and words!
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- JimBobJoeBob1234 - 07/25/2008
- bravo bravo!! heehee..... didnt u put tht on ur myspace once??? i remeber readin tht lol......
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- spikeymikeyz - 07/25/2008
- omg thats like the best story ever its really good! and it had me jumping out of my seat lol jkjk but i mean like thats freaking sweet!
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- citygurl__63-wisteria- - 07/25/2008
- good poem
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