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Amaru ran as fast as he could, away from the flesh-eating monsters. they chased him after smelling his scent, and were catching up. quickly, Amaru grabbed a pole, in case they caught up.
"damn, why do these nowadays have to be so rough?" Amaru sighed to himself.
they caught up and surrounded him, Amaru with his pole at the ready. one charged him, and Amaru spun with the pole, hitting the monster on it's side. then three attacked him. he backfliped over one, hitting it's head with the pole, and landed on another. the monster tried to scratch Amaru away, but failed. Amaru spun the staff above his head, and brung it down hard, the pole entering through the thick skull of the monster and coming out through the bottom.
Amaru brought the pole back up, waiting for the third one to attack. the third one jumped, and Amaru did the same. the other monsters also jumped, surrounding Amaru.
"hah! you guys give me the most fun!" Amaru joked.
he brought the pole over his head, hitting a monster, then brought it back to hit the monster in front of him. then he spun it around his waist so it hit the monsters on the side, and threw it at a monster diagonal from him. he landed safely on the ground, all the monsters dropping dead.
"that'll teach ya," Amaru said and sighed, starting to walk away.
surprisingly, a hand grabbed Amaru by his foot, dragging him screaming down into an open hole.
- by Cyanide Wolf |
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- | Submitted on 07/22/2008 |
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- Title: Another Apocalypse
- Artist: Cyanide Wolf
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Description:
this is Chapter 1 about a boy and some of his friends living in an apocalypse day.
Amaru's referenced look is in the picture...
Chapter 1- First Blood.... - Date: 07/22/2008
- Tags: fantasy amaru apocalypse
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Ryan Russell - 12/05/2008
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I'd like to suggest one book to you: Hood by Stephen R. Lawhead. Its the first entry for the King Raven series and I think you'd enjoy it alot (Its Robin Hood except a million times better!)
As for this piece: Its alright, but it would have been a bit better with more description of the creatures and actions. I would've ignored it since its only a partial script, but seeing as its chapter 1 some more detail would be greatly appreciated! (I want to know!!! lol) - Report As Spam
- Cyanide Wolf - 07/24/2008
- yes well it doesn't have to make sense to you. it made perfect sense to me.
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- Julia Dream - 07/24/2008
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For something that starts off with the main character running, I'm shocked to say that this was boring, and nothing of any importance really happened in it.
Also, watch your capitalization, and don't name your characters Japanese name unless it's explicitly known they live in Japan or are Japanese by blood. It just doesn't make sense otherwise. - Report As Spam