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The bullet through the world
Left ashes for us to see
To smell each and everyday
Every kid thinking “It was probably for me…”
Like god himself
Had pulled the trigger
Or an angel screaming
When the hole got bigger
A chilling breeze
Swept down our spines
As we watched the liars
Whisper to them “I’m fine.”
It’s almost as if
Everyone’s given up
And the lord himself
Found arguing rough
And it’s almost as if
Watching a disease spread
And each time you blink
You just never know—
Your best friend could be dead.
- by XxcarlehhxX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/16/2009 |
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- Title: Behind Your Shoulder
- Artist: XxcarlehhxX
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pretty depressing >.< - Date: 06/16/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- crying penguin - 10/21/2009
- Wow I love it! 5.1/5
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- polarice264 - 09/07/2009
- cool. like the hair. i am thinking of changing mine like urs. wink
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- James Torque - 08/10/2009
- Interesting. Very different from the poetry that I am used to reading. Thank you for posting.
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- Missy_J1 - 07/20/2009
- nice 5/5
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- Raixa_Phantasy - 07/14/2009
- wow.... you could turn this into a short story. Just a suggestion
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- Fayne Darkness - 07/11/2009
- It's quite lovely, short, but still lovely poem biggrin 5/5 I loved it
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- Twisted Starlight - 07/09/2009
- T-T thats deep....5/5
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