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I should have treated you like s**t.
Treated you like a dog.
Made you feel like you didn't mean a thing to me.
Then maybe you would love me like you love her..
I should have messed with your head.
Played with your heart like a yo-yo.
Make you so confused you couldn't think.
Then maybe you would love me like you love her..
I should have cheated on you with your friends.
Make you question your drive to live.
Make you have so many sleepless nights.
Then maybe you would love me like you love her..
I should have never answered your calls.
Ignored your txts and never talk to you.
Make you worry if I was alive or not.
Then maybe you would love me like you love her..
I should have never been excited to talk to you.
Act like you were just another guy to me.
But be really excited about every other guy in the room.
Then maybe you would love me like you love her..
But instead..
I treated you like you were the most important person in the world to me.
Loved you with all my heart and handled yours like it was thin fine crystal.
Made you talk about things that were keeping you up at night.
Answered every call no matter how late or how early I had to get up the next day.
I stared at my phone waiting for your answering txt.
You were the only guy I was excited about talking to.
I only had eyes for you.
I guess I was taught wrong..
Instead of treating someone you love like a king and treat them right..
You're supposed to treat them like a meaningless, stupid, worthless, dog..
I've learned my lesson.
From now on I will never treat a guy like he should be treated.
- by Brenna_Inn_Vatn |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/25/2008 |
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- Title: I should have..
- Artist: Brenna_Inn_Vatn
- Description: This is a poem type writing i wrote about a guy that was absolutely "head-over-heels" for that dropped me like a ton of bricks for his ex who treated him like s**t. Long story.
- Date: 12/25/2008
- Tags: should have
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Haruhi Alucard - 05/09/2009
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pity this poem can't b voted for I would have given it full 5.
Oh! and while ur at it, if I were u, In ur situation......I'd kick his a**! That or I'd b at home moaping 4 about a week. But awesome poem! - Report As Spam
- Brenna_Inn_Vatn - 05/06/2009
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1. This IS in the poetry section.
2. I DID meant to type "texts" as "txts" I don't care what you think it SHOULD be spelled.
3. It wasn't just DAYS. It was FIVE YEARS of my life.
4. This guy was from Ohio/Indiana. - Report As Spam
- Luminene - 04/14/2009
- Treat others like you wanted to be treated...I agree with the texas girl!*laughs*
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- NekoClone - 04/01/2009
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Nice poem. Used to have days and guys like that.
Sweetie, keep your chin up! You will find the right guy, all girls do.
I waited for a long time to find mine, and now i am married to him.
Sure, I don't get to see him often cause he is in the military, but he is kind, gentle, loving, tender and my knight in shining armor.
Don't give up all you girls out there!! You will find your knight!!! - Report As Spam
- iginnett - 03/30/2009
- This is a cool peice of writing. That's how my life has been going for five years straight.
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- DreamySilver-shewolf - 03/27/2009
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Reminds me of how ******** up my life is right now....
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