Scarlet Roses

• Artist: Epic Dino Rawr
• Description: This is the beginning of a book I hope to someday have published.
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: scarlet roses

Life for Rosealeigha is normal. Well as normal as a demon`s life can get when your surrounded by humans. Suddenly her life is thrown upside down when she is forced to move away to Lawrenceville, Georgia. But, not all hope is lost. Rosealeigha gets support from her siblings while she struggles to adjust to her new life and still keep up the allusion if being human. After her family moves, she begins meeting and befriending strange humans unlike any others she has ever met. One of those people ends up being the school`s quarterback and the hottest guy in school, Blake. Yet, as fate has it, he just has to a girlfriend who is also the cheerleading squad captain and the hottest girl in school, Jessica. Even through that, strange things keep occurring that keep bringing Blake and Rosealeigha together. Will Rosealeigha ever get the guy? Will she be able to keep her secret from him and everyone else? Will she even survive through her sibling`s betrayal?

Comments

[Piggyzilla]

I agree, it kinda sounds like Twilight.
Also I don't mean to be mean but that sounds very genaric and I have read about 20 books that sound just like that.

[Simply A Detective]

kinda reminds me of Twilight.......... i agree w/ Remy

[Remy Lafayette]

^.^ I like to be positive about my criticism so it can help to improve your writing.

First, grammar mistakes, proof-read before you post.
"your surrounded by"
Your refers to possession, not "you are".

Also, just the...plot of the story. It really sounds like a book you'd read at the library of a middle school in the romance section, not a best seller (which is what every novelist aims for!). Might want to work on making it more unique. Try to add more detail as well.

Good luck.

[Tokyo Atom]

Lawrencevill, GEorgia! do you live in GA? Good begining........ smile

[squishedjellybear]

it kinda reminds me of a story i already read.

[Fairest_of_the_Fallen]

is there an actuall story to this?
cuz this is like a synopsis or sumthing

[phamcandy]

hum................