dont talk to me if you cheat

• Artist: alfonsos-angel
• Description: boys canb be heart breaking
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: dont

Don't say you love me and you don't,for I know you better than you know me.
The way you look at me then look at her,
the way you say every word to her,
the way you tell me your in love not with me but her.

Stop playing and just make up your mind,for I cant take it anymore.
You said you will love me till the end,but all you told was lies.

Your the reason I go to bed with tears rolling down my face
at night. don't think of me just don't even call me for I don't want to talk to you, you cheat.

Comments

[Nana Shinu Ai]

wow true luv

[XxAmaris639xX]

meh
the writing isn't great and the topic is just sooo overdone
"ooh he broke my heart! *sob sob"
It was okay. If I could vote it'd be about a 2/5

[LexyCobriana]

It needs work - like someone else said "not brilliantly written". I mean, it happens to us all, so I understand the content, but at the same time, it lacks originality.

[bellsforever]

wow this is just amazing.

[Dargelus]

Yeah this is very much not in the right section, but I'll rate it just the same. A couple lines are much too long for the structure of the rest of it. I would be careful about whether or not you're going to use caps starting each line or not. I'm confused, does he say he loves "you" or "her"? Small spelling errors, doesn't really end smooth. 2/5