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1st Date
1st Hug
1st Touch
My heart is beating in my chest. I am sure that he can hear.
2nd Hug
2nd Touch
1st Laugh
Drowning in his glittering red eyes. Lost completely in the moment.
1st Taste (of Lobster)
4th Sip (Of wine)
1st Giggle
Soft lights, secluded table. The music pulses in rhythm with my breathing. Shallow and sharp.
6th Sip (of wine)
1st Dance
2nd Dance
His body against mine, swaying to the music. He doesn't care who is watching.
3rd Dance
3rd Hug
1st Mouthful (of ice-cream)
Dessert is sweet, this night was wonderful. I can't stop chattering on the way home.
2nd Laugh
2nd Giggle
4th Dance
We sway to our own music, laughter ringing in the garden outside my house. Thank god for the fence.
4th Hug
3rd Touch
1st Kiss
I'm completely enraptured in that instant. His mouth pressed over mine, his body pressed to mine. His tongue, his scent, his taste. He's overpowering me, possessing me. I don't fight back...
4th Touch
5th Hug
1st Goodbye
Hopefully it's not the last.
- Title: 1st Kiss
- Artist: Azraella
- Description: I wrote this at a time when I was very romantically inspired. There was a story to go with this relationship and several other poems.
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: kiss1st
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kellogx - 06/04/2009
- its realy good
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- Killamonga - 05/23/2009
- i like it =p
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- Broken Blind - 05/18/2009
- hey, nice! i liked it
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- bindyblueeyes - 05/17/2009
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strwberry
don't worry your life will pick up
you'll find some one
and they'll be perfect for you - Report As Spam
- Light-Dark12 - 05/15/2009
- Love it, so romantic!
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- HORRY SHIET - 05/13/2009
- I've been reading entries for the past twenty minutes, this is by far the best I've read so far. I like it so much because it's so simple, it's sweet and lyrical. At first I was kinda like =_= over the whole first thing, but then, I guess once I realised, yeah, well, good job :]
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- princesskeena1 - 04/28/2009
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wohohoho tht was coolio
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