are you there?

• Artist: insainartist
• Description: where is my love
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: whereareyou falling goodbyecruelworld emptyness

where are you?
i can't find you.
there's an emptyness i sence
there is a hole that i can't fill
life is boring meaningless
there is nothing i can do to stop these thoughts from eating away at my soul
its almost gone, this ledge i'm standing on is getting slick.
i'm losing my footing, i'm about to fall. i need you to catch me.
oh no i'm falling i can feel the ground creeping up on me.
500...400...300...200...100...90...70...50... i'm almost there.
its almost over.
the pain will end soon.
oh look my friend the ground.
it has been a long time since i've seen you
i've been soaring for so long.
how can it be, it will all be over soon.
30...20...10...hello my old friend.
goodbye cruel world.

Comments

[iDreamKitty]

Ummm. You should check your spelling

[whateverloopsyourfruit]

I really like this!! the concept had great meaning. And yeah, there were some little things missing here and there, but overall it's a 3/5!

[TailandTail]

hmm... very interesting... kind of an emo style though!

[vintyy]

this is pretty bad, i gotta admit.

[Cammie Cub]

I loved it.

[LilithLucian]

really good, touching. good job

[Reias]

I liked the concept. However, I find that the format makes me want to simply skim over this. Lots of letters are not capitalized and there is a lack of some commas here and there.