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I don't love you
I just love what you are
And the things you do
And the hurt I'll get from this
Will most definitely scar
But I don't love you
Though I'll always care
How could I not,
With every loving word, every kiss,
That we shared?
But I don't love you
Though I probably could've learned
These events have changed that
Your unconditional love
Is not something I have earned
But I don't love you
I never will, my dear
So find someone new
Someone who won't abandon you
And bring you to tears
Because I don't love you.
- by cue the catchy piano |
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- Title: But I Don't Love You
- Artist: cue the catchy piano
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Description:
i wrote this today, instead of working on my end-of-tri project. silly me.
rates and comments are appreciated mucho, as always. - Date: 11/11/2008
- Tags: dont love
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- chichibaby10493 - 04/13/2009
- love it
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- Smashing Heartbeats - 04/12/2009
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It feels close to heart. I like it [:
comment and rate me?
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- Harmonious Dischord - 04/05/2009
- I'd give it a 5. I can totally relate.
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- odido the king - 03/20/2009
- that was good not bad at all i would give it a 5 :]
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- Zariah Khi - 02/26/2009
- very nice,,,but it's confusing and the end was sad
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- JoyceCrant - 02/12/2009
- That was really good, and kind of sad....i like it!
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- CascadedRuins - 01/26/2009
- I find it sad but I really do like it. I could totally understand that.
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