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I'm told the world is gonna end
every time I breathe,
step, and even blink
I'm told we're all gonna die
with every choice
that we think
it's way to much
we're gonna sink
there is no way
we'll find the link
someone dies on contact
with the floor,
with the choice, no one knows
someone else to blame
for our mistakes,
our death, and our woes
it's way to much
we won't get rid of the kink
there is no way
we'll find the link
the walls are alone
with no one to call,
help, or even hold
The walls are alive
to get rid of the old,
cold, and their only fold
it's told there is haven
in the streets,
homes, and family
but there they hold
and never let go
I'm told the world is gonna end,
we're all gonna die,
these walls are alive,
i'm the only one who can save us,
i'm the only one to blame,
and even the lurid lie
there is a haven
I know there is a chance
I know there is a battle
I know it hurts
I know it's wrong,
and I know it's right
and I know, somewhere, i'll be accepted
- by ILikeBabyBarPoo |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/12/2010 |
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- Title: I'm told it's all gonna end
- Artist: ILikeBabyBarPoo
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Description:
Note: i'm not spelling heaven, i'm spelling haven
please rate and comment, I want to hear thoughts - Date: 12/12/2010
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kaiwaa - 07/03/2012
- dwadaw
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- The Soul Selects - 06/28/2012
- What's funny is it's called "I'm told it's all gonna end" and I went to vote and it says "voting has ended." Yeah...Not so funny when it's being told though huh...?
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- inBrightShadows - 03/22/2012
- eh over done.
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- Kumajirou-Canada - 06/19/2011
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"But I feel as if the entire... "depression" genre is a bit overplayed."
Agreed. It's alright. Um... Poem or Lyrics? It's in the wrong arena. But yeah... - Report As Spam
- Seraphiel The Forgiving - 04/10/2011
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Mm, I've but a simple issue with this.... poem...
I understand that you've put so much time in it and for that, I respect it. But I feel as if the entire... "depression" genre is a bit overplayed. You've talent, use it towards a less scene genre. Do something that most do not. =) - Report As Spam
- Alec Dead - 01/26/2011
- very nice.....for all you greek mythology lovers out there check out my stories! but very nice christopher
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