sasuke vs naruto

• Artist: sasuke uchicha12
• Description: sasuke fighting naruto
• Date: 12/10/2008
• Tags: sasuke naruto

in morning naruto eats ramen sasuke and sakura are playing hinata is practice naruto and sasuke wants to fight naruto:i will win! sasuke:so naruto:grrrrrr i will win!!!!!sasuke surprised k dont talk lets fight now naruto surprised k sasuke:chidori!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! naruto:rasengan!!!!!! .......................................... sakura:stop!!!!!! naruto:sakura sasuke : what are u doing here sakura: sasuke naruto stop fighting!!!! hinata: naruto lets eat naruto:............................. sasuke : continue fight naruto surprised k!!! sasuke:devil chidori !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! naruto:fox!!!!!! rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!! rasengan!!!!!! sasuke surprised u win naruto:i win! sasukecongratz!!! hinata :naruto naruto: yea hinata:lets celebrate ur winning naruto : ok hinata : kiss at naruto naruto : why u do that hinata: i lv u naruto : aaaa.......................................... naruto: what did u say? hinata:nothing naruto surprised k






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Comments

[Dr Mario RP]

Have you been sleeping in English class for the past ten years?

[dr shrunk]

ya u shud like enter between dialouges plz it wud really help
its so confuzing the way u did it srry
it was a good basic story but the structure was horrible i dont wanna sound like an ela teacher but i gotta rate it 2/5

[Alex Princess of Unitopea]

BAD BAD BAD!!! I can't understand anything! FIX IT!!!!! I read it 10 times and STILL didn't know what the heck you were saying so fix it or QUIT WRITING!!!!

[yom125]

lol nice smile

[Ulianah]

he he he...
i like the ending

[Girls of FF]

Crappy. Not literate. I read it three times and I still cannot understand what happened. Fix your english please or at least TRY.

Use the 'Enter' button and appropriate punctuation please.

No need for smileys.

I am surprised that you are a narutard and CANNOT write Uchiha well >_>

Epic Fail.