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Title: REALITY: IN THE SKY
Artist: Warashi Hikari
Description: A drawing for a manga series I'm thinking of going through with. Just thought I'd put this up!
Date: 05/02/2009
Tags: reality
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Comments (7 Comments)

The Grey Sanctuary - 05/28/2010
Kid, you'll need t pratice more, don't be afraid to make the manga, remember the more you do the more you pratice the better experience. So go ahead and don't waste your time on reading opinions from others that don't seem to have logic.

Is your art, and you have a unique style and nobody can deny it! Keep foward and don't let the comments destroy you, learn from it and improve...3/5!
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The Grey Sanctuary - 05/28/2010
@Angel Nicholson -Just because he put reality as a theme dosen't mean it had to be represented physically, it could an abstract point, like a feeling, an idea, next time look more deeply the meaning of it.

@Lunar Diva - body proportions aren't exactly that important, there are many styles to do so like the doodles and cartoons. What's really important is how much passion you do it and what meaning are you representing.
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Angel Nicholson - 11/16/2009
Okay. Sorry to be so rude, but proportions do matter to a point when it's a manga. And unless the chick is like 12 with huge boobs, she should have some sort of hip thing going on. Right now she's got none. Funny though, that you call it reality and nothing is even near realistic about them.

You'll get better the more you practice though, It certainly looks interesting enough.
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xXxMusiC_LuvVeRxXx - 05/03/2009
it doesnt rly matter if its out of porportion cuz its his style!!!! everybody has there own style and many are out of proportion!!!! so ignore them and good luck on making yur manga x3
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SilverWolfCub - 05/03/2009
I disagree- It's not out of proportion if that's the style he's gonna draw it on, and shutting others down without even giving em a chance to get better just shows how immature some people really are. So Warashi keep practicing and don't mind the critics, they only make you better.
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Kriemhild Gretchen - 05/02/2009
Proportions are important. Right now, the bodies look horrible and the background you have clashes with the picture. Don't even think about making a manga until you master the basics. That means proportions, shading, clothing wrinkles (you are seriously lacking there) and facial proportions.
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Hannibalism - 05/02/2009
I actually don't think they're that out of proportion. It looks good for the style and everything doesn't have to be proportional.
Looks great!!
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