- by 7nicoletta |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 01/18/2009 |
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- Title: Goddess of Music and Dreams
- Artist: 7nicoletta
- Description: This is some avatar art I did of myself. It is done in a Disneyish style, and for once, actually came out as planned! Only some of the drawing is shaded, the more prominent, darker colors. Mostly everthing else is supposed to be white. The image is a little tilted from being scanned from my sketch book. Please leave your opinions, and study the image closely. What can I improve on? What did I do well? Is this art you would actually buy? Please be honest, but not mean.
- Date: 01/18/2009
- Tags: goddess music dreams avatar
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Comments (7 Comments)
- MistressofInk - 12/02/2009
- Very nicely done!
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- Mon Amour Antoinette - 03/08/2009
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lol i can tell you're not a fan of drawing hands
(seeing as you're hiding them as my bff used to do lol)
it's good, but it does need the hands. - Report As Spam
- taiwanese girl_lii - 02/14/2009
- kool
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- Trouble Gail 3 - 02/02/2009
- interesting
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- catholic_demon - 01/21/2009
- i guess its cool but you couldve just told us it was you
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- Ark the Guardian - 01/20/2009
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0 star(s) color
1 star(s) background
1 star(s) shading
1 star(s) technique
1 star(s) originality
4/5
comments: I'm not absolutely loving the shading, but it's there.
Also color should be present unless otherwise notified as sketch.
If this is a "drawing" You need more variety of your shades.
More background would be delightful.
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- cherry144 - 01/19/2009
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Hair should be a little more detailed and longer, and the dress should be tilted the same way as her body. If you want to get proportions right, make sure there's a head-to-body ratio of 1:7 (or so). Try to draw her hands, even if you have to put them in gloves to make them look right.
A nice start. 3nodding - Report As Spam