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- | Submitted on 11/09/2009 |
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- Title: Kieto vs Whitefang 2
- Artist: Kieto_Setsuga
- Description: Yeah, this is the second page of our battle, >u< (btw the guy i'm fighting basically just acknowledged he would fight me, and complimented my leg XD )
- Date: 11/09/2009
- Tags: kieto whitefang
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Captain Critique - 12/30/2009
- Continuing, your entire lower torso is too small. It should be twice the size of the upper, about 5-6 headlengths long. Your feet in particular could be a lot bigger. I REALLY like the eye in the lower lefthand box, and your clothing and wrinkles are great. I like it a lot, overall, but you could use a lot of work too. Sorry if I sound like a batch, but I'm just trying to leave a useful comment (since hardly anyone ever does in these arenas >_> wink .
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- Captain Critique - 12/30/2009
- Instead of the usual "omg that's good" that almost everyone in this arena gives, I'll give you some actual comments x3 First off, your handwriting is decent, but small and the text bubbles are horrible. In real life, i'm sure it's easy to read, but online, it looks awful. Larger speech bubbles and handwriting are nessiccary if you want your manga online. Also, with the boxes, PLEASE use a ruler or a pencil as a ruler at least. They look very sloppy. Your hands are surprisingly good.
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- xDark_vs_Lightx - 11/23/2009
- thats amazing. You got the skillz.(I cant draw decent looking stick figures)
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- jason-vorheese425 - 11/13/2009
- wow pretty sweet wish i could draw like that sad
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- MaeAtNight - 11/12/2009
- hmm i cant really see the text but the art looks good so 3/5
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- MIladygene - 11/10/2009
- wow thats ou a my ill
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