- Title: lolz adventures : shadowranger
- Artist: Dosi san
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Description:
im making a dosi lolz adventures... this is my serious one..
im making all kinds of comics of the specific character...
im sorry for the lined paper its all i got
dosi:...?
Shawdow Ranger go!!
police:Everyone FIRE!!!
police 2: aight!!
police 3: sir!
*psssshew!!! pshheww!!*
ploice: IT DIDNT WORK!!
fall back!!
don: watch out....
your here...
dosi:yah i was here but...
shadow:you think you friut cakes can stop me!!
*sweeeeeeeeeeeeo!!* - Date: 07/11/2009
- Tags: dosi adventures shawdow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Yume_Silvermoon - 10/26/2009
- Hmm, interesting story! I think it would be more dynamic if you vary the layout of the panels a little bit more. Maybe even have a character "cross over" several panels sometimes to show a progression of events in the background. Or during her transformation scene, it might look neat to forego panels altogether and just have kind of a collage. (Just offered as example, of course. I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story.)
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- Thea Longbottom - 09/05/2009
- ooooooohs. i is confused. O.O reeeaaaally good art but.... what's the storyline????? T.T
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- Reyzak - 08/18/2009
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Look interesting...
can make more? - Report As Spam
- jenns_pulve87 - 07/16/2009
- this is interesting 0-0
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- Picturesque Honey - 07/16/2009
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Interesting....
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- shin hoseok - 07/11/2009
- ahah!Thats awesome!Fruit cakes!
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