- by The Satoshi |
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- | Submitted on 05/03/2009 |
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- Title: #3
- Artist: The Satoshi
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Description:
This is page #3 of the online yuri comic Scarecrow Lullaby if you want to see the comic in it's full version click the link below
http://www.drunkduck.com/ScareCrow_Lullaby/
THIS IS MY COMIC I MADE IT WITH MY OWN HANDS!!!
Content ©2008, 2009, 2010 Satoshi. - Date: 05/03/2009
- Tags: scarecrow lullaby comic yuri fantasy
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Catalytic Productions - 09/13/2012
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The different panel shapes used here are interesting but they don't make sense. They shouldn't make the comic look like someone cut bits out of a magazine and pasted them over each other.
The panel where our main character imagines what might happen to her bag would have been enough to tell us she was afraid of being picked on. You could've showed that aspect of her character through things like this instead of spelling it out earlier.
Also, her hand in the bottom panel looks oddly elongated. - Report As Spam
- Frex-Kate - 01/07/2010
- Nice ^^...like it biggrin
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- Swagbito - 06/22/2009
- I love the chibi panel!!
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- HyperActivity - 06/11/2009
- her neck's doing something weird in the last panel ^^ otherwise, good job!
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- Hinsei_13 - 06/07/2009
- The one with lighter hair reminds me of Crona from soul Eater! X3 This looks awesoem! 5 stars!
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- Master Yumeka - 05/15/2009
- amazing job
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