- Title: Azixel vs Nemine
- Artist: Azixel
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Description:
Azixel (Nobody)
And Nemine (heartless,Nemine means No one) My kh oc's. Ready to fight.
The dialogs:
Azixel: No way...you died...
Nemine: Yeah...like you will die now.
you can see it on da: http://flamingkhheart.deviantart.com/art/aziVSheartless-fake-screencap-144861233 - Date: 05/15/2010
- Tags: kingdom hearts manga anime azixel
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Sailing12 - 06/04/2010
- im laiks anime as regards the picture I don't have reservations but too short dialogue and therefore 3...
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- Rin seragaki - 05/28/2010
- I understood the dialogue it's pretty cool with the characters ^_^ Great work. Especially on the red head :p
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- Samefag - 05/23/2010
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Dialog is pretty bad. 4/5
In the second panel you could go with something more careless like: "Not as dead as you think..." or something like that.
And in the first something that would go with her face, she looks like she's raging a bit so you could try something like: "You should be dead!!!"
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- Zack Majic - 05/16/2010
- I like the animation, but they dialouge could use some work. 4 Stars.
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- riseark - 05/16/2010
- cool, but maybe the words could go in a dialogue box? took a bit for me to see the word 'like' in Nemines hair ^^"
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- Cafe-kun - 05/16/2010
- Haha nice one 5/5
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