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  • Platinum V.S. Steel (page 1)
  • Title: Platinum V.S. Steel (page 1)
  • Artist: CuteyHoneyChan
  • Description: This is it!! 12 months of work for 35 pages of glory!! T_T
    Please be kind since this is my first full comic and I worked hard on it!
    Anyway, enjoy!
  • Date: 01/22/2009
  • Tags: platinum steel page manga
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • CuteyHoneyChan - 03/05/2009
  • Well, I mean just be constructive....
    You make good points, my backgrounds and anatomy need work...A LOT of work....(-_-);
  • SkippyWaffles - 03/05/2009
  • You want us to sugar coat it just so we dont hurt your feelings. Not only does that give it a false reputation, but it gives you the false idea that its perfect. Im going to be blunt. It has virtually no perspective (needs a vanishing point), the page layout and gray scale is very boring and generic, it lacks sufficient detail, and your anatomy is off
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