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  • Fallen Angel
  • Title: Fallen Angel
  • Artist: XXX-DawnTwilight-XXX
  • Description: Its the part of my manga where the heroine asks that hero for a date.
    If you want to finish reading it you can go to my profile or to www.freewebs.com/kingdomsfantasy
    I promise that my first chapter wont be dissapointing
  • Date: 06/24/2009
  • Tags: fallen angel
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  • The Nameless Pharaoh - 06/24/2009
  • I like your style--it's very pretty and soft. :] But just a bit of advice: even in manga such as Ceres: Celestial Legend or others of a very shoujo style, the male character's eyes are typically smaller than the female's, as are the irises and pupils. Also, when seeing a person from the side, the eye tends to look "shorter" since you are not seeing it in full from the front. Your characters could also use a few more differences in their facial features, but overall it is easy to see who is who.
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